Enfolding (a poem)

Enfolding
for Sarah Johnston - happy birthday

There were ideal forms once,
seen in a past life.
Brought forth by strokes,
short graphite lines adding up,
forming the ideal that once was -
my hands tire.

And these varied flavors,
sour and sweet and fresh,
that last one perhaps
above all. Again I find
that key element, no
collapse into sameness,
but even the tongue
needs parsley.

We think beauty arises
from the earth's green,
or the mist's gray.
But I know what
would sustain
my vision,
my feeling,
and it would not be me,
or it.

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4 Comments

  • I just con­verted to the new blog­ger too! What a coincidence?

  • SORRY i MISSED YOUR CALL THE OTHER NIGHT. I AM A BUSY BEE RIGHT NOW! KEEP GETTING PULLED IN A MILLION DIRECTIONS. I THINK THAT I AM PAST THAT NOW THOUGH, I THINK? I HOPE THAT THE SEMESTER IS ENDING WELL! I KNOW IT MUST FEEL WEIRD TO BE GETTING READY TO GO, ESPECIALLY WHEN IT IS A FEW WEEKS AWAY.

  • I rest my head on native shore
    To Dream sweetly of love once more.
    Wearily have I made this jour­ney
    Hop­ing I too may be wor­thy.
    That I may sip my reward
    From the cup of my Lord.

  • isabella mori wrote:

    There were ideal forms once,
    seen in a past life.
    Brought forth by strokes,
    short graphite lines adding up,
    form­ing the ideal that once was -
    my hands tire.”

    my hands tire, yes, that speaks to me. don’t quite know how. always bring­ing forth forms, maybe that’s tiring?

    asso­ci­a­tion: in light of our recent con­ver­sa­tion on my blog, of course i am pay­ing par­tic­u­lar atten­tion to the “form” and “sen­sa­tion” aspects of this poem.

    know­ing about form, know­ing through/about sen­sa­tion — that makes me think of ger­man philoso­pher max scheler: “knowl­edge is the par­tic­i­pa­tion in the thus­ness of an entity, and a pre­con­di­tion for this par­tic­i­pa­tion is tran­scen­dence, which can be called love or devo­tion. (a quicky trans­la­tion from my ger­man philo­soph­i­cal dictionary)”.

    when, instead of bring­ing forth forms or con­stantly sub­ject­ing myself to sen­sa­tions, i sim­ply par­tic­i­pate in a spirit of love and devo­tion — will my hands still tire?

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